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Thursday, 14 April 2016

Chocolate Experience Writing






At school we did experience writing about Lemons and Chocolate. I wasn't here to do the lemon experience because I was at Cycle Safe. I did do the chocolate writing though and below is my description of what I Felt, Tasted, Smelt and Saw.

What a dazzling piece of lumpy, minty chocolate that is reaching the edge of my tongue and now i’m thinking, when will the choo-choo train enter the dark cave. The tension was more and more stronger by the minute as this cocoa pyramid got closer and closer. What an explosion of chocolate flavor happening in my lucky mouth. As this scrumptious piece of chocolate dribbles down my throat like a football. I feel all minty.



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