Show Don’t Tell
~ I didn’t mean to kill her
Plan - self defence, Russian organisation, the cabal, Raymond Reddington, Elizabeth keen,
Story ~ A long slow weary week had passed, no progress within the organisation, she was just too fast for them. “I didn’t mean to kill her” the only 6 words we would ever hear, she had a helper, one who was only ever known as Reddington, an international murderer. Keen had been on the good side for so long noone knew she would go and do something like this. “I didn’t mean to kill her”, nobody knows the whole story, she whooshed away straight after the bad turn of events took place. The whole organisation is after her but she’s just too good. She continuously blamed it on this Russian organisation with the name The Cabal, she would say it was run by one of the governors, nobody ever took her straight. People still wonder why she’s on the run if she’s innocent, can you tell me why?Idea from The Blacklist (a t.v series on Netflix)
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hi sahana,
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thanks from ashanti the best :)