This is what I created from little metaphors into a paragraph. Please comment on what I did really well and what I need to improve on.
She is a night owl, staying up all night till around midnight, wishes she could sleep but always can’t seem to find a way. The classroom was a zoo, craziness all around, this side that side but “uh oh” My teacher Mrs Raisin is a dragon, “Do This, Do That.” She once called me an atrocious, harmful person, it was soooo parsimonious.
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