Leave Me Alone!!

Here is my writing that I have been working on for the past 3 weeks. We have been learning about Persuasive Writing in class and our teacher Mrs Shehata got us to write about something we want to change in our lives and this is mine that I have written.

* Green Means persuasive language

Sahana Mulrine

180 Waterloo Road

Hornby,

Tuesday 8th August

Lana Mulrine

80 Mint Avenue

Islington,

Dear Mum,

I have been telling you about these issues for a long time and I thought it was about time I write you a formal letter. I am writing this letter to you because #1, Aone #2, Aone #3, Aone!. It’s about time she doesn’t get let away with everything as she does already, She annoys me, follows me around and last but definitely not least she blackmails me and you have no idea about it because it always happens behind your back. She might only be eight but trust me when it comes to Aone, don’t underestimate her.

P1: Aone is one of the most annoying people I have met especially when it comes to being nosy to what I am doing, when I am doing it and where I am doing it. She is sooo nosy but, the thing is, everything she does to me, she does it behind your back or when you're not looking such as smirks, rolling her eyes or just being the little rugrat (BRAT) she is. I think she would be one of the best nosy people in the world that she would make it onto Guinness World Records 2017-2040. She is annoying when she asks me about my day and she even asks me what every single friend of mine did but then sometimes I ignore her but…  sometimes I do tell her what Aroha, Sophie, Kyra and I did.

P2: Aone is known to follow people around but when it comes to me she does it continuously especially if I am video calling my friends. She tries to listen to what they are saying and if she didn’t understand it she asks me what they said and I normally say “go away” but she doesn’t or, she just annoys me by turning up the volume on her video all the way up. If I am video calling my friends like Kayla, Alesha, Summer or on a group chat she is trying to pop her head in or she just tries to wrestle me and after a short time it gets really annoying. Also sometimes it would be nice if I could have a little bit of privacy because I need my privacy. Yeah, I do tell her some stuff but no, no, no, no, she needs to give me time to myself, I need it and I want it.

P3: Aone gets let away with everything and I mean everything. If I was doing something for you and she ruined it she would cry and then like I said get let away with it, even if it wasn’t my fault. Lately she has been getting away with less than usual and that makes me happy but sometimes she still gets let away with stuff. When she cries I know that i’ll get blamed for it because it’s just what she does sometimes, she is like literally a crybaby if she doesn’t get her own way and that makes me really, really, mad!!!

Conclusion: Now you know all of the stuff that Aone does behind yours and dad’s back, so now the question is, later in life, Will she be punished?

Yours Sincerely, Sahana!